self reflection

I didn't really change much of my writing at all. I like the raw and on the spot writing we do in class and changing it just doesn't seem right to me. I do believe I changed one introductory word in one of my pieces, but that is all. Boosha!

three of three pieces

This woman seemed like the cleanly type...before I hopped into her garbage can. She must have just cleaned her refridgerator. Moldy beans and stinky cheese. Coffee grounds, the majority...and she doesn't recycle!

two of three pieces

Grins on their faces that would make clowns look sad. But they begin to grow bored of their current location, and allow there eye-balls to roll to another and stumble upon a door to the outside world.

one of three pieces

Slow-paced and enjoying our first walk in the woods together. Where the earth tones have become warm. So warm they have to descend. Slowly, hundreds of autumn leaves repel on the chilled ground. Covering all that is dirty brown.